나는수누 [884792] · MS 2019

2019-05-17 01:28:12
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1. I usually play the guitar in my free time.


2. Also, I do love music itself, so I Iike playing other instruments.


3. Being curious about everything is my advantage.


4. So, I can pay attention to everything that happens in my school.


5. But, It also can be my disadvantage, because there are secrets someone wants to hide.


6. My future dream is to be a big data professional in the field of music.


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